Undergraduate / "Sibling Class" - Something you do for the pleasure of it [9]


I feel like this could be innocent AND adorable questions, or innocent yet adorable. Maybe it's just me..


Again, something feels weird about this, perhaps you could write:

"Although we have a lesson plan to complete, I feel most engaged with the kids when..."
Something along those lines.

I agree with winstonli, there should be a transition of sorts before you just jump into that only child sentence. Great topic though.