Essays / A good introduction to an essay about myself? [10]

As a struggling high school student I know what its like to have people doubt your capabilities. It is those same people that keep me motivated to achieve my wildest dreams. My ambition helps me set my goals and it is my determination that helps me accomplish them. All those setbacks in between make me stronger therefore making me into a better person. My name is Olivia Aguilar, I am 16 years old and these qualities are what make me.