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Aug 31, 2011
Undergraduate / Essay for experience@singapore why I want to participate in this programme, how to? [8]

I have made a few more changes. Is it ok to have 154 words? I am not able to reduce 4 more words.

Experience@Singapore is an opportunity for me to get a worm's eye-view of the diverse work culture and the signature trait of Singapore: Multiculturalism. This will be my first exposure to an international environment and a truly world-class city-state like Singapore will give me great understanding of the international setting. My short-term goal is to find a position in a forward-moving company with solid performance and projections, ultimately leading to a prime managerial role in such a company. Singapore promises high prospects of professional growth and thus, I am looking forward to work there. Experience@Singapore is an opportunity to evaluate if I fit into work culture of the participating companies as many of them recruit from IIM-Bangalore. Professionals in Singapore have a balanced work-life and Experience@Singapore is a chance to get a glimpse of life after office hours. It is a great platform to meet IIM alumni and learn about the adaptive challenges of relocation.
raj1   
Aug 29, 2011
Undergraduate / Essay for experience@singapore why I want to participate in this programme, how to? [8]

Any help in corrections?

I have revised it a bit.

Experience@singapore is an opportunity for me to get a first-hand experience of the work culture and the signature trait of Singapore - Multiculturalism. This will be my first exposure to international environment and a truly world-class city-state like Singapore will give me great understanding of international setting. Singapore promises high prospects of professional growth and ...

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