Undergraduate / Academic Interests and Colorful Life-- Why Stanford Essay [7]

I like what you've written so far, but you've still got a fair few words to play with. I think you need to write in a lot more about why Stanford is a good place for YOU. It seems as though at the moment, you've mainly described the benefits of Stanford, which is okay, but I think it needs to become more personal and attach yourself to the qualities of the university, more explicitly explaining why these things are important to you.