dalamaneda
Oct 22, 2010
Undergraduate / 'In and of the City' and 'In and of the World.' + 'Bring a person' - NYU [5]
Aside from the grammar issues; I liked the idea of your last prompt very much. Including your background in a prompt as an answer to such a question is impressive. But I think you should start with a more striking sentence, for it is a striking answer, that might even give a little clue about Libio Martinez and his life. I also think that in your reply. you should explain "I will thank and let him know.." more about your gratitude; and why would you not bring libio martinez himself to the place.
Good Luck
Aside from the grammar issues; I liked the idea of your last prompt very much. Including your background in a prompt as an answer to such a question is impressive. But I think you should start with a more striking sentence, for it is a striking answer, that might even give a little clue about Libio Martinez and his life. I also think that in your reply. you should explain "I will thank and let him know.." more about your gratitude; and why would you not bring libio martinez himself to the place.
Good Luck
