Undergraduate / "The influence my father has had in my life" - Texas common application topic A [4]

I think that it's a good story, but it didn't really show why your dad's important to you or the impact his declaration of love had on you. I'd revise it by adding more details as to why he was important to you or had a greater impact on you and cutting a lot of the "how you found your father".

I think that the essay has a good word count.

You don't have to include a title, but it does help bring attention to your paper.