Posts by cornelia

cornelia

Nov 8, 2010

Poetry / My assessment entitled five senses poem (tastes/sounds/smells/looks/makes) [6]

thank you for your response
at least i have an idea on what to do with mypoem
tnx a lot

cornelia

Nov 6, 2010

Book Reports / Essay about the symbolism in the story "Everyday Use" - feedback [3]

.in this story the symbolism that helps Dee and maggie is their quilt that their mother gave to them. Even if maggie and dee was realy diferent from each other they do the best thing that their mother told them to. .

cornelia

Nov 6, 2010

Undergraduate / "my dad is still in my life" - Influential Person [2]

.for me ur essay is good.
.and ur grammar is good. .
.you use the words correctly and fited to d essay.
.you have a future to be a journalist. . .
.you have a very touching story
.keep it up. .

cornelia

Nov 4, 2010

Poetry / My assessment entitled five senses poem (tastes/sounds/smells/looks/makes) [6]

.please help me in this assessment. Tnx. .

cornelia

Nov 3, 2010

Poetry / My assessment entitled five senses poem (tastes/sounds/smells/looks/makes) [6]

can you please help me on my assessment entitled five senses poem
.here is the format
line1: (an emotion or idea) is (one or two color)
line2: it tastes like __________
line3: it sounds like __________
line4: it smells like __________
line5: it looks like __________
line6: it makes me feel __________

please answer my assessment i need your help to do this
please respond
.tnx. .