blanca_g
Nov 16, 2010
Undergraduate / "Interest in Agriculture and Life Sciences" - Cornell CAL supplement essay [4]
It's a REALLY good essay. But, i notice a lot of grammar mistakes. Do not use conjunctions for this essay since it's formal. I think you should do option 3 and just cut off some unnecessary information.
But other than that great job!
With all regards,
Blanca
It's a REALLY good essay. But, i notice a lot of grammar mistakes. Do not use conjunctions for this essay since it's formal. I think you should do option 3 and just cut off some unnecessary information.
But other than that great job!
With all regards,
Blanca