Undergraduate / Sugar and spice and everything nice. (my world) [7]

hi
I think ur off the topic. The dreams and aspirations should be the focus. Also it can't b this casual. u have used 'product' too often.

Describing ur rel with ur parents like this makes u dependent which may work negatively.
Try to put in some negative aspects like bad rel, social probs, cultural issues as a child which inspire/ motivate u to be a Psychologist