rosily
Dec 3, 2010
Graduate / The area of Marketing - SOP for PhD [3]
Hey, thx a lot for your feedback to my SOP. here are my advices:
1. you did good job in coherently describing your education and TA experinces, your motivation to pursue a PhD degreee and a detailed plan for your prospective career plan, good job!
2. I guess a little more professional understanding and foresight about your interest area will be helpful~
3.if you want your essay to be more interesting, why don't you add some little concrete stories happened during your TA experience or your dissertion research?
Hope these are hlepful~
Hey, thx a lot for your feedback to my SOP. here are my advices:
1. you did good job in coherently describing your education and TA experinces, your motivation to pursue a PhD degreee and a detailed plan for your prospective career plan, good job!
2. I guess a little more professional understanding and foresight about your interest area will be helpful~
3.if you want your essay to be more interesting, why don't you add some little concrete stories happened during your TA experience or your dissertion research?
Hope these are hlepful~