Astral
Dec 20, 2010
Undergraduate / "Business & Political Economy + Global network" - NYU Supplement Essays [7]
I agree with Chanman. The essays themselves are well writing, but the overall topics feel generic.
Minor tweaks with sentence structure (just my personal taste) and fixing some sentences, as well as the topic and you should be set.
Also, the NYU character limit is 500. I'm gauging your essays to well over 1200 characters, so you really need to cutback on what you have written. Make everything succinct and clear, as the input box only takes 500 characters. Although i could be mistaken if Stern has a different requirement.
(I'm applying to NYU too, but not to Stern. Good luck!!
I agree with Chanman. The essays themselves are well writing, but the overall topics feel generic.
Minor tweaks with sentence structure (just my personal taste) and fixing some sentences, as well as the topic and you should be set.
Also, the NYU character limit is 500. I'm gauging your essays to well over 1200 characters, so you really need to cutback on what you have written. Make everything succinct and clear, as the input box only takes 500 characters. Although i could be mistaken if Stern has a different requirement.
(I'm applying to NYU too, but not to Stern. Good luck!!