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Dec 26, 2010
Undergraduate / "From a remote Canadian town to Columbia University" - Supp - Why Columbia? [8]
I'm not going to lie - that was brilliant. Probably better than 90% of the drivel that admissions officers receive, anyway. There's nothing especially creative or outlandish about your response, but it elicits a really positive image of you as a student. Somehow, it just "works".
There are some slight grammatical errors, but they don't detract from your message:
Growing up in a remote Canadian town, the radius of my influence was, in the most generous times, limited.
^ Subject confusion.
I'm not going to lie - that was brilliant. Probably better than 90% of the drivel that admissions officers receive, anyway. There's nothing especially creative or outlandish about your response, but it elicits a really positive image of you as a student. Somehow, it just "works".
There are some slight grammatical errors, but they don't detract from your message:
Growing up in a remote Canadian town, the radius of my influence was, in the most generous times, limited.
^ Subject confusion.
