Undergraduate / "SHE" - an individual who has had a significant influence on you [2]

It is amazing, the impact that one brings upon your life and the way they influence you in the smallest and simplest ways. Without guiding me she has just simply inspired me, her presence throughout my life has made me who I am today and established a mind set of goals I plan to accomplish. From her experiences she gives me advice to onward me into a better future.

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