Stephy Michelle
Jan 13, 2011
Undergraduate / "Fashion" - an essay for the art institute of philadelphia [7]
So i should just take that part out of the essay ?
So i should just take that part out of the essay ?
Stephy Michelle
Jan 9, 2011
Stephy Michelle
Jan 8, 2011
Undergraduate / "Fashion" - an essay for the art institute of philadelphia [7]
i want to know if what i wrote is understandable catches the readers attention and is a good essay to be sent out to the school
Question : "what are your career goals and how do you expect your education at the art institute of Philadelphia to help you attain them ? in what ways will you participate and commit to your education to be successful ?"
My answer :
The environment embraces your creativity, which is wonderful because I tend to wear my uniqueness on my sleeve. The Art Institute Of Philadelphia allows you to be open and provides a quality learning experience with that said Throughout the time I spend at the Institute I will participate in every way that I can so that my career will be a huge success such as Internship, Fashion Shows, Fashion Week and Assisting people around the campus with their sense of style. Often times sacrifices tend to come in and destroy things when it is in the mixture of life. Sacrificing will not be a problem with me because honestly all my life I have sacrificed something to get where I am now everyone should understand that not only does education come first but your career is at stake. I am aware that it will be important for me to surround myself in activities that is encouraging to my passion for fashion. Along the way I learned that I could also strive to become the Fashion Stylist, Fashion Merchandiser and Fashion Event Planner that I've always dreamed of, it was not until the end of my freshman year that I learned about The Art Institute, and its offers. Going to The Art Institute of Philadelphia , seems to be my ticket OUT of the doors of Tragedy and into the doors of Good Fortune. Fashion is unique and creative. Fashion also allows you to gain insight of the embrace it has over your creativity and imagination.From my understanding, after researching, I can attain a Bachelors of Arts, in Fashion design , Management and Marketing, within three years. After taking all the classes that are required for this career, I will be well prepared for what I enjoy doing, for a living. Buying, styling, and having the proper knowledge to become apart of the business that moves the world, Fashion !
i want to know if what i wrote is understandable catches the readers attention and is a good essay to be sent out to the school
Question : "what are your career goals and how do you expect your education at the art institute of Philadelphia to help you attain them ? in what ways will you participate and commit to your education to be successful ?"
My answer :
The environment embraces your creativity, which is wonderful because I tend to wear my uniqueness on my sleeve. The Art Institute Of Philadelphia allows you to be open and provides a quality learning experience with that said Throughout the time I spend at the Institute I will participate in every way that I can so that my career will be a huge success such as Internship, Fashion Shows, Fashion Week and Assisting people around the campus with their sense of style. Often times sacrifices tend to come in and destroy things when it is in the mixture of life. Sacrificing will not be a problem with me because honestly all my life I have sacrificed something to get where I am now everyone should understand that not only does education come first but your career is at stake. I am aware that it will be important for me to surround myself in activities that is encouraging to my passion for fashion. Along the way I learned that I could also strive to become the Fashion Stylist, Fashion Merchandiser and Fashion Event Planner that I've always dreamed of, it was not until the end of my freshman year that I learned about The Art Institute, and its offers. Going to The Art Institute of Philadelphia , seems to be my ticket OUT of the doors of Tragedy and into the doors of Good Fortune. Fashion is unique and creative. Fashion also allows you to gain insight of the embrace it has over your creativity and imagination.From my understanding, after researching, I can attain a Bachelors of Arts, in Fashion design , Management and Marketing, within three years. After taking all the classes that are required for this career, I will be well prepared for what I enjoy doing, for a living. Buying, styling, and having the proper knowledge to become apart of the business that moves the world, Fashion !