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shurtleffryan   
Jan 23, 2011
Research Papers / Thesis + Arguments for research paper on Obedience / Need help ! [4]

I do not know when you were born or who you are, but if I was on this topic I would gear my paper on how peoples obedience has changed over the past 50 years. A lot of children now a days do not have the manners they use to (e.g. Use of words like yes Ma'am, no Sir or Yes, please, and thank you. They say things like ya, na, gimme). It blows my mind how some parents do not take the time/discipline to teach this to their children.
shurtleffryan   
Jan 23, 2011
Essays / Can you help write a descriptive essay about me? Conclusion. [8]

You can take a look at my essay that I wrote about myself if that will help you?? MY REASON FOR VIEWING LIFE AS AMAZING (I was in five different hospitals) there is the link or you can find it under the unanswered section. The title is WHY LIFE IS AMAZING.
shurtleffryan   
Jan 22, 2011
Writing Feedback / MY REASON FOR VIEWING LIFE AS AMAZING (I was in five different hospitals) [2]

It was the day before Halloween in the year 2008. I woke up opening my eyes to bright lights in a white room, the feeling I had at this time was as though I was being born again. Did not have the slightest clue as to where I was or how I arrived there. I felt something tingling on my hand, looked down to see what it was, to my surprise it was a leech, shocked and confused I immediately flung this creature off of my hand. I then heard a noise to my left. It was my mother opening the door to my room at Walter Reed Veterans Hospital. This was the beginning of my life. My name is Ryan David Shurtleff, an I am going to share with you from what I know the start of my new life.

The first word I remember was my mom saying was, "Ryan", with joy and compassion in her voice. Right after was my confused response..."mom?" I then started asking questions, "where am I?" My mother replied "Walter Reed".

"Where is that?"
My mother- "Washington DC."
"Im back in the states?"
My mother- "Yes", with her lips curling upwards and all of her teeth showing.
.... "Why?"
My mother- "You were struck by an I.E.D. (Improvised Explosive Device a.k.a. Bomb)
One side of my lip curled up and my eyebrow on the opposite side raised.
"Haha thats funny mom, but seriously what happen?"
My mother- "I am serious, look at yourself!"

The smirk left my face and my eyebrow dropped. I then remembered flinging the leech off of my hand. I then pondered for a second. Took my gaze off of my mother an started looking down at my body. First thing I noticed was that my right arm was being held together by metal rods screwed into the bones. Then the body cast that I was wrapped in, also felt bandages wrapped around my head.

I was in five different hospitals for nine months going through therapy all day - every day, fighting to better myself. I owe my life to the people that supported and helped me in all the hospitals that I was in. Without the help that they gave me, I would not be here today writing this story. After my visit to the hospitals I returned to Fort Stewart, Georgia to complete the paperwork necessary to finalize my service in the Military. I am now here in Introduction to Business, learning a new skill in life.

After the story I have just shared with you, I hope you appreciate your life just a little more. All in all I am a fun loving twenty-five year old male with a lot of drive to be a productive human being in the time I have left.
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