ThuHien
Feb 10, 2011
Writing Feedback / I and my sister went to the supermarket together [4]
Today I and my sister have gone to the supermarket together. Big C is one the scene, where happened a serious case. When we was buying goods in the supermarket, my sister suddenly cried out and only speak one sentence that she has lose her wallet that has a mobile phone inside manufactured by Nokia. This is the second time she has been lose the mobile phone. A small flow of tears from the conner of her eyes streamed out but she still tried to keep back her tears. I can see it. I have to admit that the thief's professional skill is very skillful stealing everything. I don't think that his skill can be well up like this. The thief has hiden his face a clever way. He thrust his hands into her pockets while pretending to buy dry beef at the next stall. He took advantage of the situation to merge into the crowd who was going shopping to prepare mechandise for the Tet holiday. Security personnel in the supermarket warned customers against putting their laptop in the shopping trolley and should brings it to the stalls for sending their commodities instead of holding them. Being lost the wallet is completely unexpected. I only want to admonish everyone of the danger lurking everywhere nothing so much as the Tet holiday. Do you want to be fed up about being lose your money on this holiday?. Say No. You need to be careful of money. A piece of carelessness may create these unfortunate consequences. Remember that money doesn't grow on trees. Good luck for you.
I have to admit that my English level is a bit bad. I want to improve it so that I am determined to post my daily writing with a gleam of hope that fellowships can correct for me. Thank to your comments. Help me.
Today I and my sister have gone to the supermarket together. Big C is one the scene, where happened a serious case. When we was buying goods in the supermarket, my sister suddenly cried out and only speak one sentence that she has lose her wallet that has a mobile phone inside manufactured by Nokia. This is the second time she has been lose the mobile phone. A small flow of tears from the conner of her eyes streamed out but she still tried to keep back her tears. I can see it. I have to admit that the thief's professional skill is very skillful stealing everything. I don't think that his skill can be well up like this. The thief has hiden his face a clever way. He thrust his hands into her pockets while pretending to buy dry beef at the next stall. He took advantage of the situation to merge into the crowd who was going shopping to prepare mechandise for the Tet holiday. Security personnel in the supermarket warned customers against putting their laptop in the shopping trolley and should brings it to the stalls for sending their commodities instead of holding them. Being lost the wallet is completely unexpected. I only want to admonish everyone of the danger lurking everywhere nothing so much as the Tet holiday. Do you want to be fed up about being lose your money on this holiday?. Say No. You need to be careful of money. A piece of carelessness may create these unfortunate consequences. Remember that money doesn't grow on trees. Good luck for you.
I have to admit that my English level is a bit bad. I want to improve it so that I am determined to post my daily writing with a gleam of hope that fellowships can correct for me. Thank to your comments. Help me.