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Feb 15, 2011
Undergraduate / "a follower and listener" - Personal Statement-Purdue -Qualities of a good leader [3]

Hello there! I wrote this essay and I am pretty sure its not that good, that is why I need your help!
The title of the essay is: What are the qualities of a good leader? Use examples from your personal experiences to illustrate your particular leadership style. Any help would be really appreciated! Thanks a million!

A leader is not someone to be served like a king but a consistent follower and listener. A modern leader is not someone who we believed a typical renaissance aristocrat leader who monopolized the decision making but someone who encourages empowerment respects majority ideas, flexible, fair and many other selfless goals oriented.

I am a sportsman and family oriented person. Being a team player and learns to live in group environment, I do excel in sports and was voted as most valuable player for more than a year. This probes that I got some qualities of a leader yet and has a capacity to grow more and be one of the ideal leader in a modern way.

During my time as a team captain of my specialized sport (basketball), I manage to bring my school into the limelight's by winning an inter school sports tournament. This is not the best thing I did but to bring my team into one spirit and enhance sportsmanship and camaraderie regardless of our faith and culture. I came from multinational academes which challenges you on dealing with different colors and norms. Modesty aside I did unite all my teams due to my effort and values which my family a great impact on my transformation from childhood to adolescent.

I love my family and being a Christian Arabic person I learn the values of respect, self reliance, thoughtfulness, and perseverance. I felt and I can justify that I am a born leader because it never shows on my actions and result not only in school but in my family and friends as well.

I never had that attitude of being the number one or someone who decides for everyone but leading and guiding everyone in a common great goals and having selfless interest and this made me sure that I could be one of the leaders who ever defines it.
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