malakot
Mar 2, 2011
Writing Feedback / Contrasting between two jobs (commuting, hours, job type) [3]
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If you can help me to check my paragraph ,I will tankful.
Contrasting between two jobs I have had
I had two jobs witch differed in several ways.First of all, the working hours of the first job were different from the working hours of the second job. In the first job, I was working eight hours a day. On the other hand, in the second job, I was working only seven days a week. In addition, the second job was closer to me than the first job. While I was spending more than an hour commuting to the first job, I was spending only ten minutes commuting to the second job. Finally, unlike the first job, the second job was work performed by a team. For example, I was doing all labor alone in the first job .However, I was doing most labor in the second job as a team work. Over all, the second job and first job differed in work hours, location and work performed.
Thanks
HI
If you can help me to check my paragraph ,I will tankful.
Contrasting between two jobs I have had
I had two jobs witch differed in several ways.First of all, the working hours of the first job were different from the working hours of the second job. In the first job, I was working eight hours a day. On the other hand, in the second job, I was working only seven days a week. In addition, the second job was closer to me than the first job. While I was spending more than an hour commuting to the first job, I was spending only ten minutes commuting to the second job. Finally, unlike the first job, the second job was work performed by a team. For example, I was doing all labor alone in the first job .However, I was doing most labor in the second job as a team work. Over all, the second job and first job differed in work hours, location and work performed.
Thanks