Writing Feedback / What role should Australia play in future world affairs? [15]

Thanks Laura :) yeah it is awesome I've got an extension, I've only had a couple weeks of school this year because of the stupid cyclone! Dx

Ok, so cut out all first person parts, and does it seem like a good idea to have 3 main arguments, and then also a counter-argument?

And yeah, I definitely need to cull the amount of words!

It helps heaps Laura, much appreciated! Good luck to you too!