parisa_kh
May 15, 2011
Graduate / Bussiness of Design: Letter of Purpose [3]
Hi
I am new here too, and I don't have any expertise in writing, but these are some points which come to my mind about your writing:
The understanding of business is invaluable to any creative creative is an adjective and should be followed by a noun . Throughout my career in design, I constantly find myself lost in books about branding and business management, along with all the classic readings by great designers. Over the year's I think you ment years here I have been an avid avid has a negative meaning, exchange it with enthusiastic, or other better words reader of H.O.W magazine, business section;.(dot) here i think is better than ; I have chewed through & digested many articles over the years, because of their insightful look at the commerce of a creative career. I feel believe is better for here good design is good business; but but is not common in formal writings, use however or although , and change the sentence to increase its effectiveness, a person must have a thorough understanding of both matters and how they are connected "of both matters and the connection between them" . This awareness has made me work with an assortment of start up companies, enablingenabled me to experiment ideasafter to, you should use a verb and graspgrasped business models on a fundamental level to produce more applicable design solutions. I've also worked across multiple sectors, from print to web for over 5 years; this has been a blessing and I continue to remain a humble pupil of design. As a graduate student I intend to build upon these principals and continue to expand my understanding of the business of design.
at the end of your writing, write one or 2 sentences and appreciate the committee for taking time and reading your essay
Hi
I am new here too, and I don't have any expertise in writing, but these are some points which come to my mind about your writing:
The understanding of business is invaluable to any creative creative is an adjective and should be followed by a noun . Throughout my career in design, I constantly find myself lost in books about branding and business management, along with all the classic readings by great designers. Over the year's I think you ment years here I have been an avid avid has a negative meaning, exchange it with enthusiastic, or other better words reader of H.O.W magazine, business section;.(dot) here i think is better than ; I have chewed through & digested many articles over the years, because of their insightful look at the commerce of a creative career. I feel believe is better for here good design is good business; but but is not common in formal writings, use however or although , and change the sentence to increase its effectiveness, a person must have a thorough understanding of both matters and how they are connected "of both matters and the connection between them" . This awareness has made me work with an assortment of start up companies, enablingenabled me to experiment ideasafter to, you should use a verb and graspgrasped business models on a fundamental level to produce more applicable design solutions. I've also worked across multiple sectors, from print to web for over 5 years; this has been a blessing and I continue to remain a humble pupil of design. As a graduate student I intend to build upon these principals and continue to expand my understanding of the business of design.
at the end of your writing, write one or 2 sentences and appreciate the committee for taking time and reading your essay
