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Gianna   
Oct 15, 2008
Grammar, Usage / Is there any error in this phrase? [8]

Is there an error in this phrase?

To obtain MBA as starting point for reuniting my business experience and engineering background, then establishing my career in marketing field in a multinational electronic company such as Samsung.

Obtaining an MBA as a starting point for reuniting my business experience and engineering background will then establish my career in the marketing field in multinational electronic companies such as Samsung.
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