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ramonalford   
Jun 24, 2011
Writing Feedback / To preach a Sermon [2]

Please help me and i need someone a proofread my essay, Thanks!

A good example is the best sermon as I may be presented as preaching to people. That will touch their hearts and new changes. This give people to be blessings for everything to teaching them to have new experiences. The symbol of poetic, racism, and the importance of education would affect people's lives saved.

My inspirational sermon poem that I would like to share with people realize their results are.
"It's Time"
Why repeat another cycle, when you can come. It is time now to get up and be about your father's business. It s your to show yourself approval unto god. It is time to pick up your bed and walk. It is time to walk in kingdom authority. It is time to speak those things that be not as though they were. It is time to increase your faith, without doubt and believe that God can do what he said he would do. It is time to possess the land. It is time to walk in divine power to the point when you walk by someone would get healed from your shadow. It's time to be saved, stayed saved and save someone else. It is time to think high (think outside the box). It is time to give god all the praise. Do not worry about whose looking get your praise on, your deliverance, decrease self and increase god. It is time to be a blessing to someone else. Especially those who can not repay you. It is time. It is overdue. Surrender now. Give your all to God. It's time to say yes lord. Yes to your will, yes to your way. Yes, Yes, Yes, Yes!

Racism is one of the biggest problems for people. My own wish is that we all can live in peace, love, respect each other and become the color people named "Race" and God wanted us to be understand "Love" mean everything to us. We are people to be part of community with strong bonds from different cultures; we could be one and act as one as human equality. Racism did a lot of horrible things the ways god create on earth. We are the people have variety of skin colors to treat each other in many ways; Racism means nothing at all. Like for example, We are colored people attend the same college, work at the same place of millions, the interracial marriage, and newborn babies as mixed races. No matter who or what we are; we have to believe in our races, cultures, and love.

In addition, importance of education is part of people's lives. To teach children and adult people to better understand the word of God and learn the subjects of general knowledge. To teach children have the opportunity to go to school and better life. To teach adult people how to be a good role model for children through wrong and right. To focus on their paths of actions to choose their careers and achievements. Math and English can be a challenge to learn how skills with the calculator and practice to write the alphabets for people in the world.

I preached a good sermon in the world to facing the people to open their hearts to listen. Even the represent of poetic, racism, and the importance of education shows the process of people's lives fresh new start on their step levels. Sermon is the best choice for people to fulfill satisfied with simplicity and to be accomplished.
ramonalford   
Jun 16, 2011
Research Papers / (the first real Americans) John Smith and Mary Rowlandson Research Essays [8]

John Smith and Mary Rowlandson are examples of the first real Americans because they are successful, heroic, and inventive. People can not be a country that most of the world looked up to. People are inspired to be American because John Smith and Mary Rowlandson were truly to have shared their own personal journals and life that people can look forward to read about. They should be proud of celebrate celeberating the American people whose who are the big honor by the traditional way of life and showing of love. They represented the best example of being honest with these kinds of expectations which can be loyal and new experiences. People admired the these two famous American because they have paved the way to a land of freedom and have given freedom of choices. People admired the these famous artists in many ways and even survived their experiences as American.

John Smith and Mary Rowland became those of the first most successful people in the colonies known as the past 300 years. They were more important to the success and survival; their lives realized which was reflected incredible bravery . John Smith and Mary Rowlandson's accomplishments were that they never give up on their own beliefs. Their narrative of the captivity stores of people believed this success is mostly the result of their challenging. The actions of John Smith and Mary Rowlandson demonstrate how they were fighting for their lives to save the freedoms.

In addition, John Smith and Mary Rowlandson were heroic people whowere the first whose have made to make/have made American culture what is today. They have become heroic people in American history because they encountered the dangerous events due to the new day that they wanted to start in this new world. They found themselves something to life whose lived through their eventful life (did you mean to live through their eventful lives so what were changed forever? Do you mean 'they found themselves something to live their eventful lives which were changed forever?) were changed forever because they exemplified the American hero to make the best of their civilizations. However, as John Smith and Mary Rowlandson found their hearts about time as run away. They found their way over exaggerated the harsh of the Indians and they are the heroic rescue of the captivity. John Smith and Mary Rowlandson fulfilled the heroic roles of both the New England and the colonial American woman.

Furthermore,people were the first of the most inventive journals -things in colonial history of time that they want wanted to prove people their journals were fantastic. They have purposes for their writings for their life and journals. John Smith and Mary Robinson only keep the journals and wrote something down everyday more more everyday like see seeing their lifestyle narrator of the story that can be proved with facts. However, as they finally realized that they could be expected to write the mixed feeling with emotion stories.

Finally, the first 300 years of the general history American American history for many things by their characteristics. They were inspired by people ever even more and made their heroic history back in the world. John Smith and Mary Rowlandson wrote the most inventive ways that make sense to people. These characteristics of successful people are the perfect example of role model for people. The time of their lives Their lifetime and their point of view must be mentioned what were important in their characteristics can be a helpful tool in the world today.
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