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Posts by anisemc
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anisemc   
Oct 29, 2011
Writing Feedback / Balance the balance of freedom and responsibility [3]

Really good essay (:

One's most precious thing in life is freedom.

Freedom cannot exist only by itself though, it must combined with something, like responsibility, which is the basic factor for people to live in society.

Possessing freedom does not mean you can do whatever you want without having any limits.

It's true that everyone has the freedom to do things, but no one is living by herself or himself.
anisemc   
Aug 27, 2011
Undergraduate / Family history, culture or environment influenced you, how? - 'family and money' [2]

My environment has affected my life quite a lot throughout the years. Things haven't always been that easy, but as a family we have learned to have faith and patience. Life is never a smooth ride. For instance, my father left my mother, my two younger brothers and I almost nine years ago. It was very tough for my mother who was taking care of three children, an eight year old, a six year old and a three year old, and at the same time working a full time job. Money was definitely tight but we learned to manage. We started to go to church and that helped out a lot. Going to church taught us how to have faith in God and have patience with Him. My father's leaving did affect me a lot, but it did teach me to be independent and rely on no one but myself. Also his leaving has made me want to prove to myself that I can succeed in anything that i set my mind to. I study hard in order to get good grades, I volunteer in the community whenever I can and i do anything in order to get good scores on both the ACT and SAT and all to be able to get as many scholarships as I can and get intoan amazing university.
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