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Sep 27, 2011
Research Papers / Nuclear Power Research Paper Help [3]

Thanks for the help. I'll remember to attach the essay here next time.

Thanks for the feedback on the intro. I wrote it before my body paragraphs and just stuck a basic thesis statement in there. I'll probably refine it after my body paragraphs next time
caa4444   
Sep 21, 2011
Research Papers / Nuclear Power Research Paper Help [3]

So i have this research paper for AP Lang. I met all the basic requirements, but need help polishing the essay. The teacher is really strict and wants a good balance of simple, compound, complex, cp-cx sentences. Also wants varied transitions, etc...

Basically, there does not need to be much content change, but a lot of stylistic change to make it flow, and have varied structure

The essay is currently 5 pages, so i'll just share a link:
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