Undergraduate / Student - connection to humanity [5]

Great i was interested throughout. However i was unclear what you meant when you said we are all one body, this seemed a bit extreme.

I like how you related the topic to the story directly indirectly

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Graduate / PHD SOPs - education (human development) - 1500 word limit? [7]

1500 is actually not that lng of an essay. Do what feels natural to you and what you feel will provide the greatest comprehension of what it is you would like to project. I always say content is better than a superficial lengthy essay.

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