Undergraduate / Transfer student looking for feedback, thanks [NEW]

Hello everyone! Thank you for taking the time out to read my personal statements. I will give you the two I've written, and you revisions you think need to be made. Thank you.

This is the essay on my intended major:

I've always thought my heart was touched by God. There is a force inside that drives the combinations of humanity straight through, always wanting to lend a helping hand to children in need. Not all people can function positively as parents. Parents are people that, in every situation, put their children first. They prioritize life around these little social beings, so they can have the best care possible. Parents love to see their children smile with laughter, and learn new developments, as a calf learns to walk for the first time. In my household, my mother has always demonstrated the providing love as I feel a parent should give, but not every child I grew up with had the same love. I was raised in a Urban community of poverty, where some parents didn't have time for back to school night, or to help you put those last finish touches on your school project, because they either were working a double shift, or trying to catch a fix from the local corner. One person that expressed her childhood neglect to me was a girl name Eugina. She stood about 5'4, with skin golden like sunshine. She was a very loving person, kind of mirrored me. She was a very well rounded student: always a mediator in areas when needed, student government committee member, and always kept a smile on her face. Eugina and I walked home daily, and I always smelled a foul odor, but never brought it to her attention, because that was my friend, and my "friend feelings" superseded everything else. One day, she just started crying and advised that her aunt took her in when she was younger because her mother was addicted to drugs. As tears fell from her eyes, she said she had to sleep with her cousin, who still released bodily fluids, and she was a year younger than us: we were 13. She expressed love was something she did feel in her home. That her aunt's children always get new toys, clothes, and shoes, and she wouldn't. She didn't even get new school clothes; she was made to wear the same clothes from the year before, even if her pants stopped where her socks started. Eugina has always inspired me from that day, to help give love to a child. I first wanted to peruse a career as a Pharmacist, but I found that science wasn't my passion. Knowing that I could help by removing a child from an unstable home, and give them a stamp of love on their hearts, is all the satisfaction needed, and that's why I've decided to become a Social worker.