Undergraduate / 'family originated in Mexico' How I can contribute to the diversity of the University [2]

I am currently working on a colleger essay for the application. Writing isn't really my strongest subject. Math is. So i would really appreciate any help I can get. Thank You!

I can contribute many things to the University of ... but a major thing I can contribute to it is its diversity. I have been around many people from different parts of the world and I have also experienced many cultures. My family originated in Mexico and about every year I visit at least once or twice. Not many people in my generation do that. I believe it is critical to explore your roots and be more culturally diverse.