Undergraduate / 'Time spent in towers' Short Answer for the Common APP (UNDERGRAD Arch) [4]

Haven taken an internship that put me well out of my comfort zone benefited me in many ways. Due to being 'hired' as a Site Engineer, I took part in a wide range of roles from learning how to program and manage fire-fighting systems, to actually visit working sites and manually install smoke detectors, command modules, sprinklers and more. Most of my time was spent in towers, which I enjoyed thoroughly. Having an impact in the completion of the towers that I have idolized was an amazing experience, I love being able to look at the skyline and feel like I had a role, no matter how small, in its creation. My colleague's financial and cultural backgrounds could not have been more different than my own. This gave me a better understanding and appreciation of different religions and cultures. Sharing food with, learning from and teaching my new friends made me more accepting of different values, of people whose goals have nothing to do with education, or my definition of success in life.

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