cheeku
Nov 30, 2008
Undergraduate / Which Professor offers faculty and research opportunities? Essay... [6]
Hi!
I think your essay is a good start. The imagery is well done. However, you should elaborate more upon Professor O'Leary, otherwise you could have simply inserted any professor's name in that essay (make it more personal and show that you took the time researching about the professor).
Also, when you say you have the passion and commitment, show that you do, don't simply state. Give examples.
Hi!
I think your essay is a good start. The imagery is well done. However, you should elaborate more upon Professor O'Leary, otherwise you could have simply inserted any professor's name in that essay (make it more personal and show that you took the time researching about the professor).
Also, when you say you have the passion and commitment, show that you do, don't simply state. Give examples.