Writing Feedback / Do we live better than our forefathers? [3]

I love the topic and your thought process on the answers but it seems you are missing some articles that make it difficult to read. For instance, The emergence of advanced technology has made humankind able to live luxurious life. The current era has coddled men with e-commerce, advanced communication ways, video conferences, digital libraries and so on.and other advanced technologies .

I really like the essay - but I would go through each sentence and make sure the structure is sound.