gradhelp2012
Jan 20, 2012
Undergraduate / 'who could memorize the most and reproduce it' - something not found on your resume. [5]
I think you're in the right direction. The topic could be great. I agree with the first comment. I think you need to expand more on the differences in studying in each country. If you put into more of what you have come away with throughout the experience instead of an explanation as to why your grades slipped and then rose again I think it will make it more of a lesson-learned type of thing. Your experience is very unique and I think you'll benefit from that. Leave out your sweat and fever sentences toward the end. Focus more on how the abrupt changes in each educational environment has made you more versatile and has taught you to be able to study and look at things through multiple standpoints. People want to know that failure because of these international differences in learning is something that you faced head on and are now better off and can appreciate the struggles bc they made you more confident and you now have an upper hand in learning for being exposed to both styles.
I think you're in the right direction. The topic could be great. I agree with the first comment. I think you need to expand more on the differences in studying in each country. If you put into more of what you have come away with throughout the experience instead of an explanation as to why your grades slipped and then rose again I think it will make it more of a lesson-learned type of thing. Your experience is very unique and I think you'll benefit from that. Leave out your sweat and fever sentences toward the end. Focus more on how the abrupt changes in each educational environment has made you more versatile and has taught you to be able to study and look at things through multiple standpoints. People want to know that failure because of these international differences in learning is something that you faced head on and are now better off and can appreciate the struggles bc they made you more confident and you now have an upper hand in learning for being exposed to both styles.