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Feb 1, 2012
Writing Feedback / writing and you [2]
please check for grammar and punctuation
is each idea clearly expressed? does the paragraph flow smoothly? is the sequence of ideas logical and effective? can you add information to it?can you revise it for me? give me a feedback
Writing is what we do in everyday life. In fact, we are all writers. We write basic things like listing chores, doing homework, making letters or emailing your friends. Writing is for all ages. Like the subject Math, only few people like Math the same as in writing. Not everyone of us are good in writing. But writing leads us to understand things, expands ideas, and organize our thoughts that are already in our minds. Through writing, we can connect with our environment and our daily routine. If we think critically, this would help us to be successful in college. The better we write the further we will get in a career.
please check for grammar and punctuation
is each idea clearly expressed? does the paragraph flow smoothly? is the sequence of ideas logical and effective? can you add information to it?can you revise it for me? give me a feedback
Writing is what we do in everyday life. In fact, we are all writers. We write basic things like listing chores, doing homework, making letters or emailing your friends. Writing is for all ages. Like the subject Math, only few people like Math the same as in writing. Not everyone of us are good in writing. But writing leads us to understand things, expands ideas, and organize our thoughts that are already in our minds. Through writing, we can connect with our environment and our daily routine. If we think critically, this would help us to be successful in college. The better we write the further we will get in a career.
