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tuyetden   
Feb 2, 2012
Writing Feedback / would you prefer to go on a long trip by car or by train? [7]

Thank you for your reviewing my essay! To be honest, my English skills is not good, and I'm trying to improve it. I find English difficult to learn, but I will try my best!

the words "give a life for others" mean that when sb wants to go to somewhere, I will help them. And about the laughing face, it's my bad habit. I will correct it.

Have a nice night! :)
tuyetden   
Feb 2, 2012
Writing Feedback / would you prefer to go on a long trip by car or by train? [7]

my writting skill is not good! hope you help me!

I love travelling so much. i always want to go to new places to discover new things such as: new people, new cultures... With the modern life and developing social, there are many tranportations you can use to travel, for example car, train, plan... For me, i prefer to go on a long trip by my own car because of some reasons.

Firsly, it is very convinient to use my own car to travel. I can go any where I want, i can also stop whenever I feel tired. It will not disturb anyone. it is not the same when you travel by train, because train have its own time table and other people, so you must go to the right station.

Secondly, when travelling by car, I can bring all the things that is neccessary. When I go camping, for example, I can bring hut, food, drink, and any things i think i will need with me. it is easer when you go by train.

And last but not least, when I use my own car, i can give a life for others. :D That is all the reasons why I choose to go on a trip by car!

thanks advance! :D
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