Writing Feedback / 'Students are developing more and more interest in arts and literature' - ielts essay [4]

Nowadays , the artists, celebrities, writters are under spot light. However the scientist are not so important in our modern world, like they used to be some years ago. I partly agreee with that. And I am going to share with my opinions.

Firstly, we see all over the papers and watch on tv about popular writers who sold their bestsellers, what these books were all about, and I think it attract people's attention more. Owing to fact, that not everybody is interested in science. For example for young people it is not interesting to watch documentaries, which I think is not good, because it developes us. On the other hand, I feel modern population is more than interested in science and technology also. Because now everything is done by machines, and people are waiting for something new to appear. For example there are so many watchers of BBC news channel's programme "click". every time there is a broadcast of some new inventions, they show which company had produced a new gadget and their advantages and disadvantages. I think issue related to science is also concerning people's minds. For instance , everybody tries to get to know some piece of information about space exploration now.

In conclusion I want to say that technologies and artists had and will always have a balanced attention, it just depends on personalities of people.