letoile
Feb 27, 2012
Graduate / Master in IS Management and programming - personal statement [3]
Hi All,
I am applying to the master in Information System Management, The following is my personal statement. Please give me your favorable comment(s) on both in grammar and content
Thanks in advance!.
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Dear Sir/Madam
I have a keen interest in information technology, especially in programming. I've been working in systems development since I graduated in 2002. During the nine years, it equipped me with the stable technical skills in programming and experience with SDLC methodologies. Through the experience of working on different IT projects, it sparks my interest in project management and I realized that my own career goal is to be a professional IT manager or even a Chief Information Officer. However, I think that my existing knowledge and experience is not enough for me to step over to reach my goal. This is my motivation behind of my admission.
To be a successfully IT manager, the rich IT knowledge and experience is very critical. But the knowledge in various areas of project is also important. I expect that the Master in Information System Management at [Uni Name] allows me to enhance and strengthen my academic knowledge about management theories and methodologies. Also, through the peer to peer experience sharing, I expect I can learn what difficulties would be faced on IS management in various industries and how to settle it by sharing the ideas.
During the time of studying in [Uni Name] for my bachelor degree, I truly believe that [Uni Name] is the best choice to due to the excellent academic reputation and atmosphere within the university.
Thank you in advance for considering my application. It is a great honor for me to have an opportunity for studying in a leading global university.
Yours sincerely
[My name]
Hi All,
I am applying to the master in Information System Management, The following is my personal statement. Please give me your favorable comment(s) on both in grammar and content
Thanks in advance!.
---------------------------------------------------------------------- ----
Dear Sir/Madam
I have a keen interest in information technology, especially in programming. I've been working in systems development since I graduated in 2002. During the nine years, it equipped me with the stable technical skills in programming and experience with SDLC methodologies. Through the experience of working on different IT projects, it sparks my interest in project management and I realized that my own career goal is to be a professional IT manager or even a Chief Information Officer. However, I think that my existing knowledge and experience is not enough for me to step over to reach my goal. This is my motivation behind of my admission.
To be a successfully IT manager, the rich IT knowledge and experience is very critical. But the knowledge in various areas of project is also important. I expect that the Master in Information System Management at [Uni Name] allows me to enhance and strengthen my academic knowledge about management theories and methodologies. Also, through the peer to peer experience sharing, I expect I can learn what difficulties would be faced on IS management in various industries and how to settle it by sharing the ideas.
During the time of studying in [Uni Name] for my bachelor degree, I truly believe that [Uni Name] is the best choice to due to the excellent academic reputation and atmosphere within the university.
Thank you in advance for considering my application. It is a great honor for me to have an opportunity for studying in a leading global university.
Yours sincerely
[My name]
