xx0xkrissi
Apr 3, 2012
Undergraduate / 'medical care for the underprivileged' - UC Davis [4]
Hey, guys! I was wondering if anyone could provide input on my waitlist essay? I'd very much appreciate it!
Thanks in advance!
As a senior applying to colleges, I believe that UC Davis is the right choice for me. Due to my strong passion for biology and chemistry, I know that UC Davis will offer me many opportunities for research, community outreach, and study abroad. The Biological Sciences programs at Davis are well known for their extensive laboratory research. The BUSP is another excellent environment for me to conduct research with highly regarded scientists. The NAIST will allow me to gain and share valuable knowledge. I plan to take full advantage of all the resources available at UC Davis. In high school, I founded the Chemical Collision Club where students can learn more about chemistry and biology. If given the opportunity to attend UC Davis, I plan to enrich the campus by creating similar clubs for fellow students interested in pursuing science as a career. My goal in life is to provide medical care for the underprivileged, and I firmly believe that UC Davis will offer me a strong foundation in my learning prior to entering the medical field. This is why UC Davis is my top choice. Thank you for your time, and I look forward to attending UC Davis.
PROMPT: If accepting a position on the waitlist, please briefly tell us why you feel UC Davis is the right place for you to continue your education. Please limit your response to 200 words. Note that you will only be able to submit your essay once, so please review it carefully before submitting.
Notes from a Waitlist student who got in: Why I want to go to Davis (Show interest- state that it was my top choice) ; How I could enrich Davis' community (join and create clubs) ; How Davis was a good fit for me (Davis fits all my college needs academically and socially).
Hey, guys! I was wondering if anyone could provide input on my waitlist essay? I'd very much appreciate it!
Thanks in advance!
As a senior applying to colleges, I believe that UC Davis is the right choice for me. Due to my strong passion for biology and chemistry, I know that UC Davis will offer me many opportunities for research, community outreach, and study abroad. The Biological Sciences programs at Davis are well known for their extensive laboratory research. The BUSP is another excellent environment for me to conduct research with highly regarded scientists. The NAIST will allow me to gain and share valuable knowledge. I plan to take full advantage of all the resources available at UC Davis. In high school, I founded the Chemical Collision Club where students can learn more about chemistry and biology. If given the opportunity to attend UC Davis, I plan to enrich the campus by creating similar clubs for fellow students interested in pursuing science as a career. My goal in life is to provide medical care for the underprivileged, and I firmly believe that UC Davis will offer me a strong foundation in my learning prior to entering the medical field. This is why UC Davis is my top choice. Thank you for your time, and I look forward to attending UC Davis.
PROMPT: If accepting a position on the waitlist, please briefly tell us why you feel UC Davis is the right place for you to continue your education. Please limit your response to 200 words. Note that you will only be able to submit your essay once, so please review it carefully before submitting.
Notes from a Waitlist student who got in: Why I want to go to Davis (Show interest- state that it was my top choice) ; How I could enrich Davis' community (join and create clubs) ; How Davis was a good fit for me (Davis fits all my college needs academically and socially).
