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PandaGirl   
May 3, 2012
Writing Feedback / The Dangers of Obesity in the United States [2]

Mainly throughout your essay, you just wrote facts about obesity rates in America. I think you need to include more reasons for the dangers of obesity. Maybe you should add in your essay to encourage people to maintain physical fitness more and more everyday.
PandaGirl   
May 3, 2012
Essays / School kids under age 13 have a boyfriend - ideas/answers? [3]

I believe that school kids under age 13 should not have a boyfriend/girlfriend because it is too early to start relationships. Usually, adults are not very accepting of the idea. And childhood is childhood, a time where you are supposed to honor your childishness and not get blamed for it. It is the time to have fun, not be nervous or worried if that special someone likes you or not. There are plenty of opportunities in the near future. Additionally, having a boyfriend/girlfriend under age 13 is just an awkward age to have one. My friend has had many boyfriends before even though she is only eleven, and her relationships weren't very interesting, in my opinion. I believe that it is still okay if you have that special one when you are in college or an adult.
PandaGirl   
Apr 16, 2012
Speeches / Speech about What the American Flag Means to Me [4]

Shanni Lam
Clara Barton School

What the American Flag Means to Me

What does the American flag really mean? Some call it Old Glory; others call it the Star Spangled Banner. In my opinion, it symbolizes opportunity, hope, justice, and freedom. Our country has so many freedoms that other countries do not have, such as the freedom to vote for all colors and men and women, freedom of speech, and so many more! We are so lucky to have these rights when many other countries are still fighting for it. I am beginning to believe that our citizens are forgetting how lucky we are to live here. They are unaware of all the advantages and privileges we have that other countries do not have.

Two decades ago, my parents immigrated to the United States from Asia for new opportunities. They thought America was a great place for more opportunities to have a better future and more freedoms. Every time I see the American flag, I cannot help but think if it were not for the freedoms of the United States, how life would be different for my family and I. Without the move, I would not be living the life I have today. Needless to say, the American flag has a huge impact on my life; I feel an intense emotional attachment between my country, its flag and me. As a citizen of the United States, not appreciating our country and the flag would be a strong insult to this wonderful country I live in.

Old Glory consists of three colors: red, blue, and white. Red represents the bloodshed from the bravery of our soldiers, who were willing to sacrifice their lives in order for us to give others a free life. Blue represents the sky; it reminds us to set our goals high as anything is possible and to reach higher and higher to achieve them. The sky is the limit. Last, but not least, white represents purity. It is not our country that is pure, but the people inside it. We, the people, are pure because we always believe in ourselves and are always willing to lend a hand to help others in need. For example, during the earthquake of Haiti, Americans donated much of their money even though the economy was struggling. Wherever and whenever a disaster strikes, America is always the first and most helpful to the country.

The Star Spangled Banner has thirteen stripes, since there were thirteen original colonies: Delaware, Pennsylvania, New Jersey, Georgia, Connecticut, Massachusetts, Maryland, South Carolina, New Hampshire, Virginia, New York, North Carolina, and Rhode Island. Seven stripes are red; six stripes are white, each alternating turns in order: red, white, red, white, red, white... In the top left corner, is a small, blue rectangle with fifty white stars, representing the fifty states that make us the country we know today.

Red and blue also represents racial discrimination since they are exact opposites. There was a time when our country would not treat African-Americans/blacks just as fairly as the whites. Without the Civil War, today, we may not be able to play with our friends just because they were a different skin color! At the same time, the Union was divided into two. Nowadays, we are united under one nation, enjoying our freedom together. The Civil War is a symbol of justice bringing our nation back to one, united, as it always should have been. The American Flag is a reminder that our nation will always be united.

In conclusion, I am proud to be an American citizen and always will be. I am especially grateful for all the freedoms and privileges the United States has to offer. Americans are forgetting how lucky we are and the American Flag is a reminder of all the privileges we have. We should respect the flag as it represents the country we live in. When I see the American flag, I hold it in my heart and it reminds me to believe in myself.
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