Writing Feedback / Essay on "We don't see, though we look! We don't hear, though we listen! ............ [3]

Well i have to tell you that i love the way you speak out with great grammar and you have a point about your speech because it just makes sense.Intelligence is what you have and keep on using that great mind of yours and maybe you can help me with my grammar sometimes

Essays / (how to argue?) Argument essay on banning smoking in public [5]

Well you should care about wether people smoke or not not just anyplace you should start off with a good topic as how you feel.For example you can say In my opinion i believe this smoking area should be banned and give your reasons out. I just love helping others out and i am looking forward to asking all of your questions. Send to me back at @ymail

Speeches / Speech about What the American Flag Means to Me [4]

Dear Panda Girl,
In my opinion i believe that whatever you think the American Flag means to you only means to you.People have their different opinions onto what they believe in.If you believe the American Flag means different things such as the Star Spangled Banner or Old Glory then this is you. Some of the songs we have for the announcements mean different things such as the men that died for our country. ll God Bless Americall. I hope you enjoyed this message

Essays / School kids under age 13 have a boyfriend - ideas/answers? [3]

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Writing Feedback / TOEFL essay - Banning smoking in public areas and office buildings is good or bad? [3]

Yes banning smoking in public areas is good because we encourage others such as students and aldults not to smoke but they insist anyway. If we banned smoking from areas many people will quit i hope. I swear and will never in my life smoke because i am in the 7th grade and learned the negativity onto smoking. Its dangerous and it could lead to death. Now this is harsh but when i was in health class i was watching this real life smoking viedo when people come out and tell how smoking ruined their lives then this young aldult age 33 was talking about how she started smoking at age ten then if yoiu saw this all of her airsacks were destroyed she had to use an airpump to get from her living room to her kitchen. So tell me this. Is this sad or not? I am sitting here thinking ---what is this was my mother ? what if So if anyone in your family smoke i encourage you to show them this message please. You don't know--You can save a life!!!!!!!!!

Essays / How to start an essay about effects of stress among teenagers? [6]

When teenagers are stressed out the effects are not always negative and the effects are not always positive. When teens are going to stress they experience bad emotions and then throw a fit. Some effects of stress are

. death
. headaches
. emotions such as
crying yelling fusing and etc well i hope i helped you alot