Justin09
Jan 1, 2009
Undergraduate / Common App Extracurricular Short Answer (varsity sports and various clubs) [5]
Comments on grammatical errors and how to improve my piece would be greatly appreciated. Thanks!
Throughout my high school career I have participated in many extracurricular activities such as varsity sports and various clubs that my school has to offer. One of my activities in particular that has made a significant impact on my personal development was my experience playing on the football team for all four years of my high school attendance. During my years as a high school student, football has taught me many lessons which I will carry on throughout the rest of my life. Not only did football strengthen me physically but it also had taught me how to be discipline, how to work together on a team, and most importantly about commitment. What I remember most about playing football was the overwhelming amounts of time, effort, and hard work that I had put into the sport. To me football was not just an activity or game, it was a passion.
Comments on grammatical errors and how to improve my piece would be greatly appreciated. Thanks!
Throughout my high school career I have participated in many extracurricular activities such as varsity sports and various clubs that my school has to offer. One of my activities in particular that has made a significant impact on my personal development was my experience playing on the football team for all four years of my high school attendance. During my years as a high school student, football has taught me many lessons which I will carry on throughout the rest of my life. Not only did football strengthen me physically but it also had taught me how to be discipline, how to work together on a team, and most importantly about commitment. What I remember most about playing football was the overwhelming amounts of time, effort, and hard work that I had put into the sport. To me football was not just an activity or game, it was a passion.
