jezeter
Aug 22, 2012
Student Talk / Some skills to gain when studying in Australia and how to use them? -essay start help [10]
my sister is going to auckland
my sister is going to auckland
jezeter
Aug 15, 2012
Book Reports / We must always put ourselves in other peoples shoes TKM - Feedback [2]
racism can have a very big impact on a person's life especially if someone has been racially bullied since childhood. i have been through racism as well and have not been as badly affected as others due to the wonderful friends i had who shielded me from years of loneliness. racism over a long period of time can build into anger which when released, can turn out disastrous. it can turn you into someone who is racist which continues the cycle of racism. i have unfortunately gone through even though I have only just turn 16. however, once you can get over racism, you'll have more confidence in yourself, have good control over your emotions and shouldn't have much trouble socializing with others
racism can have a very big impact on a person's life especially if someone has been racially bullied since childhood. i have been through racism as well and have not been as badly affected as others due to the wonderful friends i had who shielded me from years of loneliness. racism over a long period of time can build into anger which when released, can turn out disastrous. it can turn you into someone who is racist which continues the cycle of racism. i have unfortunately gone through even though I have only just turn 16. however, once you can get over racism, you'll have more confidence in yourself, have good control over your emotions and shouldn't have much trouble socializing with others
jezeter
Aug 15, 2012
Writing Feedback / 'changes of using fuel source to produce electricity' - [IELTS] Task 1--- Pie chart [2]
you should use words with more impact like dramatic increase or exponentially rather than huge.
"In constrast, there is a slight change in hydro power category in Australia"
instead of using change, just used increase etc. change is too general. its better to be specific when describing the pie chart
you can compare the pie chart of France and Australia and explain how and why they differ in relation to the economy and location of each country
also you spell popularly and contrast wrong; don't forget to read through your work for any mistakes
you should use words with more impact like dramatic increase or exponentially rather than huge.
"In constrast, there is a slight change in hydro power category in Australia"
instead of using change, just used increase etc. change is too general. its better to be specific when describing the pie chart
you can compare the pie chart of France and Australia and explain how and why they differ in relation to the economy and location of each country
also you spell popularly and contrast wrong; don't forget to read through your work for any mistakes
jezeter
Aug 15, 2012
Student Talk / Some skills to gain when studying in Australia and how to use them? -essay start help [10]
you should at each section and see what score you got on each. if your speaking and listening is low, you should try and improve your writing. you can't really prepare for reading as it is what they set you but you can learn the general topics that are likely to come out and learn how you should structure each essay
you should at each section and see what score you got on each. if your speaking and listening is low, you should try and improve your writing. you can't really prepare for reading as it is what they set you but you can learn the general topics that are likely to come out and learn how you should structure each essay
