Posts by minam
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Last Post: Aug 19, 2012
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Undergraduate /
"FIRE!" - QB ESSAY [2]
o.k :) gonna try to be as brutal as ever.
im not really sure but in line 5 u said "he criess for the young sibling he used to play the game with" should it read games or is "the game" some sort of game in particular
oh and the first line should it read fire blazes?
Essays /
A brief essay about myself - how to start and end it. [10]
OK hi Rena, well what I love to do is start essays with a bang, so perhaps you could start by quoting something the interviewee said that was meaningful or caught your attention..
hope this point was helpful
Letters /
'interest in the Data entry clerk' cover letter for an entry level position help [5]
8 August 2012
Dear Hiring Manager
Address
I would like to express my interest in the Data entry clerk or and other available positions available at ____________________ advertised on ____________________.
Not only am I highly computer literate and an excellent communicator both orally and in writing, I am diligent and able to multitask in a busy environment and exceed deadlines; hence I am confident that I am the perfect candidate for the job.
I have attached my resume and would welcome an opportunity for an interview, and I thank you in advance for your time and review of my qualifications
Sincerely
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Joy James
OK guys so im not really skilled at this wanted to keep it brief and simple so tell me what you guys think, thankss
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