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greenbeen   
Feb 27, 2013
Graduate / Letter to a prof. for phd admission - wheat genomic conference [4]

The question about appellation - eg: Professor, Dr...

What should I write:

Professor Hans de Foer and Professor Karine Piotraut?
OR
Professor Hans and Professor Piotraut?

This is my motivation letter opening!!!

Please help me!!!
greenbeen   
Oct 10, 2012
Writing Feedback / How to use "Ratio", "Disproportion" and "volume" in the IELTS Task1 report??? [3]

In Cambridge7 Test2 Writing1-Line graph (P53)

I want to use "ratio" to describe this trend
This is part of my sentences:

For chicken consumption, the figure for the time point 1979 and 2004 illustrated a ratio of one to two (approximately 140:250), which was opposite the difference of Beef's and lamb's. (2:1)

Do you think that this is a appropriate way to describe these figures??

Please see that picture~(I hoped that I could upload the picture successfully)
I even draw a table for what I saying~

And about "disproportion", can I write...
"There is a disproportion among these 4 different food consumption."

In regard to "Volume", can I use it to describe "People"?
I google this word, some people wrote that " the volume of traffic", "the volume of books"
How could I apply this word in IELTS task 1??



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