ultraann
Aug 28, 2012
Writing Feedback / [TOEFL] Attending university classes should be required or optional-Feedback [10]
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ultraann
Aug 21, 2012
Writing Feedback / [TOEFL] Attending university classes should be required or optional-Feedback [10]
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ultraann
Aug 21, 2012
Writing Feedback / [TOEFL] Attending university classes should be required or optional-Feedback [10]
Thank you to help me again. :)
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In conclusion, going to classes should be optional for students. One reason is because there are other sources that can help the students to learn better than attending classes. Moreover, good students can save more time in classes and spend these time to do other beneficial things. However, it depends on the students that they know how to deal with the effects from not attending classes or not.
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I just start writing, so could you suggest me the source of knowledge?
I want to know each type of topics and how difference I should do for each type
Thank you to help me again. :)
I'm not sure is this work?
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In conclusion, going to classes should be optional for students. One reason is because there are other sources that can help the students to learn better than attending classes. Moreover, good students can save more time in classes and spend these time to do other beneficial things. However, it depends on the students that they know how to deal with the effects from not attending classes or not.
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I just start writing, so could you suggest me the source of knowledge?
I want to know each type of topics and how difference I should do for each type
ultraann
Aug 20, 2012
Writing Feedback / [TOEFL] Attending university classes should be required or optional-Feedback [10]
Thank you for your help ah_zafari and Freenchy
Is it ok if i change conclusion paragraph to be like below?
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In conclusion, I strongly agree that attending classes in the university will not be required to the students because of the reason above. However, the students should know what activities they should do at the time and have good management for their learning time. Also, they have to know how to deal with the effects from not attending classes.
Thank you for your help ah_zafari and Freenchy
Is it ok if i change conclusion paragraph to be like below?
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In conclusion, I strongly agree that attending classes in the university will not be required to the students because of the reason above. However, the students should know what activities they should do at the time and have good management for their learning time. Also, they have to know how to deal with the effects from not attending classes.
ultraann
Aug 20, 2012
Writing Feedback / [TOEFL] Attending university classes should be required or optional-Feedback [10]
Some people believe that university students should be required to attend classes. Others believe that going to classes should be optional for students. Which point of view do you agree with? Use specific reasons and details to explain your answer.
Attending university's classes is one of activities that students have to do. However, class is not the only source of knowledge. Students also learn from other sources such as experience, libraries and other people. I think going to classes should be optional for students for the following reasons.
Firstly, the reason why university students should not be required to attend class is sometimes the students in the university can learn better from other sources outside the class room. Student can also study by themselves in the library and focus on only the topic they do not understand. For example, I have a close friend who was in the same department with me in the university. She learned quickly and understood everything in class so fast. Thus, she rarely went to class but spent most time to understand confusing topic. Finally, she got very good grade when she was graduation.
Secondly, students should not be required to attend classes because they can manage the time spending on classes to do other benefit things if they already understand topic in the class very well. In my experience, many times I did not attend biology class because my university does not require the students to attend classes. Also, I had already studied all biology topics before attending university. As a result, I spent the time of biology class to do my Chemistry research and got A+ for both biology and chemistry.
In conclusion, I think the students should know what activities they should do at the time and have good management for their learning time. Also, they have to know how to deal with the effects from not attending classes. So that, attending classes in the university will not be required to the students anymore.
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Please help to correct my TOEFL essay.
This is the first time for me for posting new thread. Thank you for help :)
Some people believe that university students should be required to attend classes. Others believe that going to classes should be optional for students. Which point of view do you agree with? Use specific reasons and details to explain your answer.
Attending university's classes is one of activities that students have to do. However, class is not the only source of knowledge. Students also learn from other sources such as experience, libraries and other people. I think going to classes should be optional for students for the following reasons.
Firstly, the reason why university students should not be required to attend class is sometimes the students in the university can learn better from other sources outside the class room. Student can also study by themselves in the library and focus on only the topic they do not understand. For example, I have a close friend who was in the same department with me in the university. She learned quickly and understood everything in class so fast. Thus, she rarely went to class but spent most time to understand confusing topic. Finally, she got very good grade when she was graduation.
Secondly, students should not be required to attend classes because they can manage the time spending on classes to do other benefit things if they already understand topic in the class very well. In my experience, many times I did not attend biology class because my university does not require the students to attend classes. Also, I had already studied all biology topics before attending university. As a result, I spent the time of biology class to do my Chemistry research and got A+ for both biology and chemistry.
In conclusion, I think the students should know what activities they should do at the time and have good management for their learning time. Also, they have to know how to deal with the effects from not attending classes. So that, attending classes in the university will not be required to the students anymore.
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Please help to correct my TOEFL essay.
This is the first time for me for posting new thread. Thank you for help :)
