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katiecohen96   
Sep 6, 2012
Writing Feedback / Topic : The effect of the illiteracy [3]

try lengthier paragraphs. the diction is interesting though, but this could be a lot better with mroe substance
katiecohen96   
Aug 30, 2012
Grammar, Usage / Two sentences; very short grammar question. [9]

(usage of Aristotelian...) - Suggestions on this paragraph?

The usage of Aristotelian appeal intensifies and adds substance to a writer's material. An author or speaker can effectively persuade his or her audience through three subcategories of Aristotelian appeal: logos, pathos, and ethos. In many movies, characters demonstrate logos, pathos, and ethos when giving speeches to evoke a desired emotion from the audience. Examples of these speeches include ___.
katiecohen96   
Aug 23, 2012
Book Reports / [Letter from a Birmingham Jail vs. Malcolm X] - Compare and Contrast Essay [3]

Hey guys. So I am supposed to write this formal essay that is a compare and contrast of Martin Luther King's "Letter from a Birmingham Jail" and Malcolm X's "The Black Revolution". I have finished my introduction, and I would just like some tips on how to make it look and sound better. If you have any tips or can think of anything I can add, please let me know! Thanks.

Also, how could I start my body paragraph without sounding repetitive? I want to make it about how the dictions of the two differ.

Two influential leaders who contributed greatly to the black revolution include Martin Luther King and Malcolm X. Martin Luther King's "Letter from a Birmingham Jail" presents a sharp contrast to Malcolm X's "the Back Revolution". Dr. Martin Luther King's demonstrates peaceful tones, calm and respectful diction, and religious imagery to aid his nonviolent arguments for justice. Malcolm X, however, uses a direct and aggressive tone in his essay. His diction is pessimistic, sharp, and forceful and his views are more resentful and skeptical of the white community than those of Martin Luther King Jr. Although both black activists lived around the same time and wrote of similar situations, each took a vastly diverse approach towards addressing the issue.
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