Undergraduate / Family history inspiration (UCF Essay) ! [5]

Do you think that destiny is for losers because it is just a stupid excuse to wait for things to happen instead of making them happen.İf we dont strugle to get anything what we want,it will not belong to us .Unless we study the chance will knok our doors. in my opinion this statement is certainly right for several reasons.

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