Scholarship / 'I listened to the lyrics' - 100th page of my autobiography [8]

this is a really good essay, beautifully written. it gives the reader a good sense of who you are. i wish i had your talent :)

Undergraduate / "Substitution! 21 for 3!" Short response for common app! Leave comments! [11]

pretty good... i hate short answers too.but dont worry about yours, it makes sense.

Determination burned in my eyes