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Sep 6, 2012
Scholarship / Family's attention and children behavior - scholarship essay [8]

Thank you so much jenny, by giving revision and suggestion for me..,I'm still have many problem in grammar,,and I must improve my capability before the final IELTS test around three weeks again. and I will wait the revision for the next paragraph. :)
Pipit   
Sep 5, 2012
Scholarship / Family's attention and children behavior - scholarship essay [8]

Question: Recent figures show an increase in violent crime among youngsters under the age of 18. Some psychologists claim that the basic reason for this is that children these days are not getting the social and emotional learning they need from parents and teacher.

Teenage violence become more popular in the recently day. The social and emotional learning participate at this problem. Some psychologists claim that this skill can be learned from parents and teacher. I agree with this opinion although we know that there are many factor beside it in causing this case. I will explain from two viewpoint in this essay.

Firstly, parents are very closely with their children. They act as example for the other family's member. How parent behave will determine the growth childhood in the future. The full attention and prosperous family will produce the children's behavior in appropriate way. It means that a student which has a poor family will different with those in a rich family. As we know that the financial problem is one of the considering aspect.

Secondly, the youngster have many experience too in outside their home including studying, playing and traveling. They will have many friends as this activity. I think that friends reflect who you are and they should choose a kind person. Beside this, teacher has a great factor in educating their student at school, not only to teach but also more than it. Teacher must elaborate the method and the topic explained with the emotional and social skill every day.

In conclusion, the student behavior today reflect what will happen in the future. Getting the social and emotional learning from parents and teacher is one way to avoid the violent crime.
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