Undergraduate / 'I did Bachelor in Arts in Pakistan' - admission in fashion design course [4]

My name is Ayesha Rasool. I am from Pakistan. I did Bachelor of Arts from Pakistan. I applied for admission in BA(Hon) in Fashion Design and Marketing. I need to write personal statement for this course but i dont know what I write and how to write. I need help to write personal statement. At the moment i write this statement but i need help to improve my statement. Please guide me to write effective and good statement please.

My name is Ayesha Rasool. I did Bachelor in Arts from Pakistan. I want to get admission in Undergraduate course in Fashion Design. From the childhood I always had interested in fashion. I design many dresses for various vocation in Pakistan especially for wedding and Eid. I always have dream to become one of the best designer of the world. I am interested to get admission in UK because it will widen my knowledge according to international standard and it will help me to introduced my knowledge and my experience according to world standard. This course is challenge for me and I am a girl who always accept challenge and whatever matter I always achieved my target. I can see myself to be one of the best fashion designer after 4 5 years.

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