Writing Feedback / Stress is the body's reaction to a change [3]

" In the mordern life, we often meet the word "stress". Stress is the body's reaction to a change that requires a physical, mental or emotional adjustment or response. Stress occurs with all of people and there is only a difference between them that is the state. It can come from any situation or thought that makes you feel frustrated, angry, nervous, or anxious even hopeless. Stress would be cure easily or not depends on how they see it. Its danger arlams people and they must think of causes. There are three main causes: environmental reason, internal reason and fatigue and overwork.

The first cause of stress is environmental reason. There are many things in environment that make them feel tired such as noise, crowding, and pressure from work or family..."

I have an exercise that write an essay by cause and effect order. I choosed topic" stress", but I couldn't find the right way for that topic. I've just thought about 3 reasons. However, I find it difficult to grow them. Please help me