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Oct 31, 2012
Writing Feedback / It was a great EXPERIENCE; A day in shopping mall. [2]

During my vacation last month, I had been to the biggest mall in south India with my family.
It was a great experience, as it's the leading shopping mall. However, the price of the items were heavy for a typical Indian. One best thing that I noticied, is the collection of fancy ornaments, because, the price of ornaments is really good as compared with other stores. overall experience had been memorable for me.

I wrote it short as I need to end between 70 - 80 words. Please check the grammetical and punctuations errors in the above essay and if found, please correct it.
nithin1234   
Oct 31, 2012
Undergraduate / Stanford Supplement; "Write a note to your future roommate"; four facts about me [8]

A day in shopping mall

During my vacation last month, I had been to the biggest mall in south India with my family.
It was a great experience, as it's the leading shopping mall. However, the price of the items were really heavy for a typical Indian. One best thing that I noticed, is the collection of fancy ornaments, because, the price of ornaments is rally good as compared with the normal stores. Overall the experience had been memorable for me.

In need to end the matter within 80 words, so i wrote it short. please check the grammetical and punctuation errors.
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